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09/02/11
I really enjoyed this! I too have those great expectations - just waiting for the sound of the trump! Great job!
09/03/11
Beautiful expressive poem eloquently spoken, just flowed along. Loved it!
09/03/11
Beautiful job of acknowleding the Lord our God through poetic praise. God Bless~
09/05/11
I wish I could write poetry like this! Well done. Pam
As I read your poem, I could feel your sense of expectation, living with "one foot in the now, the other in the not-yet." I love that line. Beautiful poem!
09/06/11
Beautifully done. I love the imagery, especially the symmetry of beginning and ending with the sailing metaphor. Great job.
09/06/11
"setting sails in stormy waters
and harbouring short of God's glory"

Loved that and so often true. Thanks for the beautiful poem!
Beautiful and quite eloquent.

the tittle is man hood,god bless