The Official Writing Challenge
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09/02/11
I like this modern version of the Biblical parable. Lots to ponder. Good job.
09/02/11
Interesting take on the parable! Enjoyed!
09/03/11
Nice job! I like it very much. God Bless~
09/05/11
Great story.. I thought the ending was strong.
09/06/11
Nicely drawn characters. I love stories about the workplace. We spend so much of our time there but it is rarely the setting for what we write. There is gold in those hills!
I liked this modern day parable. Though I'm glad you added the footnote because I don't know if I would have made the connection on my own.