The Official Writing Challenge
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09/01/11
Wow! Very poignant! Well written, held my interest start to finish. Good job! God bless!
09/02/11
Excellent story-telling with vivid descriptions. Well done. You didn't give it a happily-ever-after ending; your ending is much more realistic.
09/02/11
Good job showing how our great expectations are often very different than real life!
09/03/11
This was a different story, and well written. I liked it. God Bless~
Wow what a saga. It brought tears to my eyes. Incredible job!
09/08/11
Congratulations Fiona on placing 1st. An excellent story. Well done!
Congratulations on 1st place. Beautifully written. Very sad.
09/08/11
Congratulations. This was a wonderful story and I am so happy you earned a first place win. God Bless you~