The Official Writing Challenge
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09/02/11
Whoa, you covered the whole gamut of expectations in this story. My favorite was the unexpected one at the end. :)
09/02/11
Lots to feed on and ponder in this story, great message and great ending! Enjoyed!
09/03/11
Good job, great references to the "end times" Great ending. God Bless~
09/06/11
Nicely written and an enjoyable piece! God certainly knows the plans He has for us, plans for welfare and not for calamity to give us a future and a hope.
Good flow throughout the story, and interesting rendering of the topic. I was a little confused at the end...who was saying what.
You managed to cover so much in 750 words. I enjoyed this read and your subtle sense of humor.