The Official Writing Challenge
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08/25/11
What a great structure for this story! I was a little lost because of the lack of detail, but on a second reading, I think I like the non-specificity. Awesome creativity!
08/25/11
Yeah I had to read it twice as well, but I liked it. It got me thinking, loved the writing style as well.
Loved this! It was my favorite; a weeks jouney that really is a snapshot of life.
08/26/11
Lots of errors, but I'm afraid I missed the comedy. However it's still a well-crafted piece.
08/26/11
Tight writing, great format! What a full circle. Thanks for ending with the hope.
08/27/11
I almost got the story you're portraying here, but got lost as I thought it could be two stories rolled into one - and then I may have got it all wrong. Certainly got me thinking. Thanks!
08/29/11
Well structured,great message,but not sure how well it fits the topic being a serious thought provoking piece. However very well done!
08/31/11
Well written and thought provoking but I too felt it lacked the comedy that would have made it more fit the challenge.
Congratulations for ranking 8th in level 3!