The Official Writing Challenge
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08/25/11
Awww...So sweet. What an adorable story, God Bless your union always~
08/26/11
What a lovely story - really enjoyed this. God Bless you!
08/26/11
It seems one can write books about dates gone wrong...or maybe do a t.v. show about it! Glad your story had a happy ending, however, as it doesn't always turn out well!

I like your description of the duck "deflating." Good word choice!
08/26/11
I think I might have "ducked" for cover, but this was a great read. Well done.
08/26/11
Aw, and oops. I would say these types of events are important before marriage. Really helps you get a know the person when you're in one fix after the other!
08/26/11
Awwww...what a sweet love story. It could only get better from there, I suppose, yes? :)
08/26/11
I loved the story, an almost Cinderella story. Great writing and glad the couple is happily married! How sweet! God bless!
08/29/11
Sweet story, cute read, well done.