The Official Writing Challenge
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08/27/11
I like this. I think a second poem is in order.... about how either 1) He learned to like healthy foods (like cookie monster) or 2) how he returned to his ship and kept eating until the ship could no longer support his girth. :)
08/30/11
Cute and clever! I enjoyed it, and have been creating a sequel in my mind!
God Bless~
08/30/11
Let's hear it for Snarf - what a swell guy. Living proff that "the weak shall inherit the girth!"
Very clever and lots of fun.
08/30/11
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Let's try "proof" instead of "proff."
08/31/11
Fun, entertaining read! But terrible being left hanging not knowing if Snarf ever saw the error of his ways.