The Official Writing Challenge
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08/25/11
An amusing tale with great rhyming. I did struggle a bit with some of the rhythm in places, but loved your word choices. Especially laughed at your "use by" date.
I absolutely love this humerous poem.
The storyline unfolds in perfect sequence, and is aided by the excellent rhyme scheme.
I laughed all the way through.

I love the playful sence of humour which still allows the actuality of the story to unfold.
Grandpa just may have bitten off a little more that he could chew!

Juliette
08/29/11
Great fun here, unless you're Grandpa, with skilful descriptions and a rolling, slightly irregular rhythm. Yet given the chaos in the story the rhythm is well-suited.
08/30/11
Poor Grandpa! This entry had good imagery throughout...I enjoyed this and could see the whole thing in my mind's eye, quite the picture!
God Bless~
08/31/11
Oh what a tale in rhyme of grandpa and the dog and the cat chase! Such comical, vivid images, well written. I don't blame grandpa, I'd never walk that dog again either! LOL