The Official Writing Challenge
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08/26/11
A picture of unbridaled fun. Loved it, for I recall we got married at night with a thunderstorm crashing and flashing in an attempt to gain everyone's attention.
08/29/11
I like the story. Wedding days seem to invite mishaps, and in this wedding just about everything that could go wrong did.

I was perplexed by the omission of articles "the" and "a" at some points, and the use of brackets to enclose thoughts threw me off a bit. I realize they were used in place of italics, the preferred method of showing unspoken thoughts. However, italics may not be available here.
11/09/11
This is an interesting read. My daughter is getting married next year. It made me shiver a bit:) I wonder if God was sending warning signs too, but two wonderful children would definitely make all the heartache worth it.