The Official Writing Challenge
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08/26/11
A picture of unbridaled fun. Loved it, for I recall we got married at night with a thunderstorm crashing and flashing in an attempt to gain everyone's attention.
08/29/11
I like the story. Wedding days seem to invite mishaps, and in this wedding just about everything that could go wrong did.

I was perplexed by the omission of articles "the" and "a" at some points, and the use of brackets to enclose thoughts threw me off a bit. I realize they were used in place of italics, the preferred method of showing unspoken thoughts. However, italics may not be available here.
This is an interesting read. My daughter is getting married next year. It made me shiver a bit:) I wonder if God was sending warning signs too, but two wonderful children would definitely make all the heartache worth it.