The Official Writing Challenge
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08/27/11
Hehe I like this.

I got a bit confused at the "Who is this?" line... I thought maybe the MC had a "comedy of errors" of his own and had been calling the wrong number the whole time!

There are some good reminders here. Sin certainly can sneak up on us at times.
08/30/11
This was both funny and profound in its message.

Good job,I liked it, clever and honest. True stories are usually the best.
God Bless~
08/31/11
I liked this but I too was confused by the line "Who is this?" - it was not clear if Frank called the wrong person this time or if Gus was that drunk.
I like that Frank gleaned a good lesson from a lighthearted day of Gus's errors. Enjoyable read!

10/03/11
Funny... Interesting... Instructiive. I learnt a lesson on the dividends of persistence here. May we not yield to the temptation to give up on the eve of our long-awaited miracle. 'Who is this?' looked like a perfect time to give up! But Guz still showed up after all. There's hope! God shows up quite dramatically too - but thankfully not in a drunken stupor! A good piece. Well done.
10/03/11
Funny... Interesting... Instructiive. I learnt a lesson on the dividends of persistence here. May we not yield to the temptation to give up on the eve of our long-awaited miracle. 'Who is this?' looked like a perfect time to give up! But Guz still showed up after all. There's hope! God shows up quite dramatically too - but thankfully not in a drunken stupor! A good piece. Well done.