The Official Writing Challenge
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This is very thought provoking and I pray it touches other hearts as it did mine. Lord help us to stay on track and not fall away at all. I like your descriptions and comparisons and the relationships you showed briefly. Well done! God bless your writing continually.:)
08/26/11
I enjoyed the clutter of mini-disasters, and the youth pastor's advice. Well done.
I really enjoyed your story and how you weaved in the still small voice, echoing through the youth pastor, as you worked through the "errors" of the day. Great lessons in here!
Thought-provoking. It's easy to get on the wrong path in life. Things, circumstances, and people can draw us away from the Lord if we don't keep our eyes on Him. Thank you for for your reminder with your well-written article.
This is such a great message. I enjoyed how you delivered it without coming across as preachy. Great writing!