The Official Writing Challenge
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What a timely reminder! There is a lot of wisdom in this story. Thank you!
10/19/05
What a creative way of educating the reader - excellent! You wrote from the child's point of view well too ... outgrowing your snowsuit etc ... seeing the changes over time.

One suggestion for you is to put enters between paragraphs - just makes it easier to read.

Good job!
10/20/05
Sometimes we think that by not asking for help we appear self sufficient and strong. But, inwardly, we wish we could drop the facade and show our vulnerability. Wear and tear will show over time when we neglect to ask others to help us. This Christian journey is easier when a friend comes along. Thanks for this beautiful article:)
10/21/05
Easy to read. Beautiful message. Sure fire winner in a Christian Living kinda way. God bless!