The Official Writing Challenge
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Good story! Faith is the substance of things hoped for... Your characters were believable. Your sincerity is significant. I applaud you.
08/13/11
Unusual and portrayed in a highly entertaining way. I read it two times, and liked it better the second time! Good job! God Bless~
08/14/11
Nice that Mr. Templar realized hard and earnest workers are hard to find, in either sex and he’d better appreciate what he had! :) Nice too that Faith refused to waste her God given interests and talents because of gender stereotyping! :)
A heartwarming story that captures the heart and attention. I liked this piece alot-good characterization, believable setting and detail. Good messages here-enjoyable story I could see even as a program or film in my mind. Vividly written!
This is a great story andI absolutely love Faith. I could picture this as a TV show. You did agreat job.

Congratulations for placing 10th in Masters and 15th overall.