The Official Writing Challenge
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08/12/11
Very nice story. I also imagined the "bush" as standing amongst a world of iniquity, and it stood its ground to give hope to everyone. I liked this line the most: Who judges our impact except for the master gardener, Himself? Keep writing, God Bless~
08/13/11
This reminded me of that simple children’s song: “This Little Light Of Mine” for it is a beautiful visual of how God’s masterful touch and trimming can make a Christian stand out as a little beacon amid the gloom and thorns and weeds of life and be an example others want to follow. The specialness the little bush holds, even when it only became one of many beautifully trimmed, seems to speak of the special place the one who leads us to Christ always holds in our hearts! I really enjoyed this, great job!
This was a charming piece and I thoroughly enjoyed it.

You may want to break it into smaller paragraphs. With such a limited word count, long paragraphs can feel overwhelming to the reader.

The message here is one I can definitely relate to. You did a great job writing this lovely article.