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I pray the hope you gave your man in the verse infuses you to accomplish the vision God has placed in your heart and mind.
08/13/11
A reflective entry in terms of doing a life review in the "Spirit" and speaking in earnest to the Father for redemption and freedom from the world of today. Nice job. I enjoyed it fully. God bless~
08/15/11
Thank you so much for writing this; you've blessed me with your words, which I can relate to in so many ways. I will read this many times. Well done.
08/15/11
I really like this plea to remove the worldly and increase the Godly within and without! Enjoyed!
08/16/11
Your message is lovely and gently delivered. My only critique that the flow of the poem wasn't steady. I would have liked a stronger link between the different stanzas. Still, excellent work!
A powerful prayer that many can relate to from times to time.

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