The Official Writing Challenge
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I think all of at one time in our life have known or met someone like the main character.Good story with her daughter getting the right words to pierce her flesh to her soul, where it really counts. God Bless~
The beginning of a serious novel! Good writing. Characters were believable. Well done.
Great visual of 1 Corinthians 13:1! Too easy sometimes to become as sounding brass, or a tinkling cymbal and then God has to send a wake-up call! Interesting story, terrific characters, great job!
Good point nicely delivered
well drawn picture of earnestness throughout, with a brush of grace at the end...nice work
I so enjoy a story when the child is the one who solves the conflict. Your characters were awesome and the message great.