The Official Writing Challenge
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08/11/11
beautifully written! A delightful read
08/11/11
I liked the descriptions and abstract comparisons. Well done!
08/12/11
That was a good story! I enjoyed it. Nice ending! God Bless~
08/12/11
While she may have felt like a "toadal" disaster, I enjoyed the fun you have had with this. It reminds me fo the frog who told a beautiful girl: "Kiss me and I'll turn into a handsome prince."
"How can I be sure you'll be handsome?" she asked.
The frog replied: "Any girl who goes around kissing frogs can't be all that fussy!"
Well done.
08/13/11
Favored her forgiven state. So like Jesus to allow choices that have to be righted by kissing our present consequences in the face in the sight of God. Well done.