The Official Writing Challenge
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08/11/11
beautifully written! A delightful read
I liked the descriptions and abstract comparisons. Well done!
08/12/11
That was a good story! I enjoyed it. Nice ending! God Bless~
08/12/11
While she may have felt like a "toadal" disaster, I enjoyed the fun you have had with this. It reminds me fo the frog who told a beautiful girl: "Kiss me and I'll turn into a handsome prince."
"How can I be sure you'll be handsome?" she asked.
The frog replied: "Any girl who goes around kissing frogs can't be all that fussy!"
Well done.
Favored her forgiven state. So like Jesus to allow choices that have to be righted by kissing our present consequences in the face in the sight of God. Well done.