The Official Writing Challenge
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10/17/05
Very clever! Nice twist on the topic and excellent message
10/18/05
Ooh - spine chilling - literally have goosebumps from reading this. Very much 'out-of-the-box' and sobering. Great work!
10/18/05
Whoa, this is good; very dramatic and with the twist, a top quality story. Bravo.
10/18/05
Excellent! edge-of-the-seat stuff.
10/20/05
Oooooh, this is really, really good. A great story, and a great take on the topic!
10/20/05
Really well written. :)
10/20/05
Very, very good. Clever and creative - two key ingredients for every good writer. Great take on "Fruit." Well done!
Blessings, Lynda
10/20/05
Wow! Great stuff! Got any more? :)
10/20/05
Such intrigue! Very well written!
What an intriguing story! I thought the names were unusual when I started reading. Loved the discovery as I continued.
Wow, fascinating story! A couple of typos, but I enjoyed reading it. Great message!
Incredible ... I loved this. Very well done. This is only the second one I've read in Advanced this week but I find it hard to believe that there will be any better. Great work.
Too true, only God can open the gate! I enjoyed this!
10/21/05
Excellent. I absolutely love allegory. And this was Awesome.
Beautiful.
10/23/05
Terrific entry with a great message! Held me captive til the end. Uniquely crafted. Blessings. Jo
10/24/05
Val, I just wanted to stop by and let you know that your entry ranked 22nd overall (out of 135 entries). So well done! There really wasn't much separating the entries in the top 30 - so be encouraged! Love, Deb (Challenge Coordinator)