The Official Writing Challenge
This article has been read 632 times
Member Comments
Member
Date
08/12/11
Amen. We should all desire this kind of earnestness. Nice work.
08/13/11
Beautifully said. Good job of bringing each "emotional event" to life as you tied it to the subject at hand. God bless you~
I need it; I want it; I must have it. I seek it with all my heart. Those two sentence spoke my heart. Wonderful poem.
08/16/11
Beautifully and wonderfully said and shone with powerful images, that earnest desire to please and serve God! Well done! A blessing to read!
08/17/11
You've painted such wonderful word pictures and you do it so effortlessly.
It's my heart's desire as well. Love this piece.
mona
This really tugged at my heart for I too am seeking that kind of earnestness.

Congratulations for placing 11th in Masters and 16th overall.