The Official Writing Challenge
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I like the message and symbolism in this beautifully written poem. Sad that so many think it's better to enjoy life without God until they really need him.
This poem perfectly describes what we miss out on when we don't pursue Jesus and accept the love He wants to wrap us in. Very well done.
Brilliant piece of writing. I espcieally like the ending bringing forth the message of "what if is like without Jesus." Good job, God Bless you.
Beautifully written! If I am fearful I imagine myself 'in "the" boat' and then embraced by Him. Well done.
I love your images here.
I love the flow of this piece. It carries you right along and with powerful impact
Beautifully written, such powerful, meaningful images messaged to the unsaved. Well Done.
Congratulations on EC for this exceptional poem.
This is beautiful, and so very deserving of your EC placing!! Congratulations!
Congratulations on your EC! Beautiful work!
Polarizing is difficult because it has to be done well to engage the heart and the mind and keep us trapped with the 'appropriate pain' that we ought to feel. Your record of a woman's life is profound. I like this narrow focus that reoccurs in different variations in each described 'stage'.