The Official Writing Challenge
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Enjoyed this great characterization of a grump. And thank God for Grace!
I think most of us have come across many people like Leonard in our lives.
Grumpy old men with too much time on their hands!
For all of that I did experience a certain element of sympathy in relation to some of his grumps.

Good incorporation of the 'much ado about nothing' theme.
08/05/11
Really enjoyed this colorfully descriptive tale. Such rich phases.
08/07/11
I enjoyed the imagery, in how you have sketched the atmosphere and the emotions firing their way through Leonard's system. Surely he sees the cloud in front of every silver lining.
Terrific work.
This is such a fun exploration of the current topic; and word choice is excellent.
08/09/11
I love how you had “Grace” working behind the scenes of the grump! Loved the names and how it was all so rich in imagery and showed the challenge well! Enjoyed the read!