The Official Writing Challenge
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08/18/11
Okay, so this is all about mercy triumphing over judgment. For though the crime was committed, Christ took the man's punishment. And yes, the word count was a hindrance. Nevertheless, the point still stands: His grace covers all our crimes, whether committed against God or man.
This is really awesome and gave me goosebumps. I think it is so creative and tells a wonderful story while delivering the message that no one can earn their way into heaven. It is by God's grace alone that we will someday be reunited.I saw you mention that before you have written stories that received no comment. I diligently try to read and comment on as many as possible. I immediately went to this date because I knew I had been quite sick then. It's hard to believe no one commented on this piece Hugs!