The Official Writing Challenge
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07/30/11
creative take on the theme ... written in a style quite fitting of the subject matter
07/30/11
An enjoyable light read - I thought there might be a happy ending (I like happy endings)! Thanks
07/30/11
You brat! :D And if you were my daughter...! :)
A tribute to your dad with a little politics thrown in.
Ouch! I think I felt that. ;)
Nice job!
08/01/11
Ahhh: applied psychology - firmly applied. I'm relieved that the baby survived, for it seemed at first that the baby had died. Liked the anti-PC closer...
I can still hear my mom with that famous mantra: "Just wait until your dad gets home." Man, does this bring back memories and yes, the moral of the story rings true. Great job, wonderful story well told.