The Official Writing Challenge
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08/02/11
You've taken a familiar plot and given it new life with this entry. I think I caught an actual glimpse of your imprisoned woman dancing - very vivid! The first couple of paragraphs could be smoothed out a bit, but you caught a rhythm and the rest of the story was excellent!
08/02/11
A wonderful and interesting story about keeping faithful in adversity. Thanks!
08/02/11
Well-written story. I have to wonder if I would have the courage to worship with threat of imprisonment or death. I'd like to think so. :)
You weaved a powerful message through your well written story.