The Official Writing Challenge
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Delightful. Loved the ending.
I could just picture all of this. I'm currently reading "Of Human Bondage" and "The House of Seven Gables" and the characters seem to fit so well with the time and place. Delightful reading, as always!
07/29/11
I LOVE this. Wonderful creative take on the topic! I was hoping you would do one of your humorous poems. They make my heart glad. :)
07/30/11
This is lovely, funny and cute. Great piece - loved it!
07/30/11
Delightful and funny. I bet we all know a few ladies like that (and maybe a few singers)!
08/01/11
Oh boy:) Too cute. Judgmental old ladies. There is just nothing like them.
08/01/11
Nasty little old ladies, and they got verse and verse as they went....
08/02/11
And that's why I don't sing in the choir. :) Fun!!!
08/02/11
Original with a light touch.
I love your rhyme with ease style. "Choir - beside her,"
and not one beat out of step!
Delightful!