The Official Writing Challenge
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07/29/11
I enjoyed all the "scripture references" being tied into the story. The message of our Father in heaven is always a pleasure to read, however I might have brought more dialogue into the piece between the young man and the judge. Other than that, a very informative piece filled with God's love. Nice job. God Bless~
08/03/11
EXCELLENT sermonette - I enjoyed the read of these truths!
Congratulations for ranking 7th in level 3.