The Official Writing Challenge
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07/28/11
Heart-wrenchingly real!
07/28/11


Beautiful! I just loved...
so I once more might see heaven's sky,
and feel the seasons passing by,
to walk among the mountain firs,
O Lord, forgive for I am yours.
no other reason, for I am yours.
07/29/11
Wonderful writing - heart-rending too. I also love
'I say a prayer,
that my once captured soul might breathe
of distant Eden's fresh morning air,'
07/30/11
Pulls you in immediately - I loved it. Great job, and makes one think about "eternity"and the consequences of our actions. Brilliant! God Bless~
Lovely. It captures perfectly our soul's captivity; our waiting (scratching on prison walls) for that promised time to come - to breathe Eden's air once more.
08/03/11
Very thought-provoking in its challenge and its invitation, an dinn ts succinctness.
08/03/11
Let's rewind to "in its succinctness.."
08/04/11
Another McWhinnie win. It's in the name.:-) Congrats!!