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I like the moral you portray in this story, and the way in which you show the practical implications.
Isolationism, has become such a problem in our modern world. So many lonely people, it is a tragedy.

'Crocks and cuts.' how descriptive and needing no explanation.
It would really be wonderful if there were more 'Nicks' around to share their philosophy of the foretaste of paradise.
07/25/11
Loved your story and am afraid it could describe many people's lives. Life is hard. Thank God for the Nicks who come to our rescue.