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I like the moral you portray in this story, and the way in which you show the practical implications.
Isolationism, has become such a problem in our modern world. So many lonely people, it is a tragedy.

'Crocks and cuts.' how descriptive and needing no explanation.
It would really be wonderful if there were more 'Nicks' around to share their philosophy of the foretaste of paradise.
Loved your story and am afraid it could describe many people's lives. Life is hard. Thank God for the Nicks who come to our rescue.