The Official Writing Challenge
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I love how you draw out so poetically the beauty that we encounter every day this side of paradise.
One line in particular really caught my attention.
'The uniqueness of each individual that only God could form.' I can't quote the line exactly but the essence of the message remains.

The rhyme scheme is strong and the rhythm of the piece ebbs and flows with grace.

A very enjoyable read.
Beautiful imagery! A lovely poem. What a great God we serve who took such care in creating our world. I'm glad I'm on the "elevator" with the "million-dollar views."