The Official Writing Challenge
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07/27/11
Amazing! You did a wonderful job of putting all of this beautiful story into such a small amount of words, fantastic! Love it, it was captivating.
Congratulations for ranking 6th in level 3!
This is a great story. I knew where you were going as soon as you mentioned the young one looked familiar. It would be a great twist ending if you moved that line to the end. I did love the characters and the message is one so many people need today.