The Official Writing Challenge
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07/23/11
There is a lot to reflect on here, and I think you have accurately caught the thinking and emotions of the different growth stages. Well written.
I wasn't sure at first about how you segmented your paragraphs with individual headings - but it works.
I particularly liked your paragraph about soul-mates and the challenges you faced together.
07/25/11
I still haven’t figured out in my mind if this other person was a spouse or merely a close friend, different stanzas made me have different views…but this was absolutely wonderful in its emotional vision!! Enjoyed!
07/27/11
Love your originality and your headings, very well-written. Brought back memories of different people in my life, thank you for this!
Congratulations for ranking 10th in level 3!