The Official Writing Challenge
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You paint a beautiful picture of the Montana Pastures. Your descriptions are vivid and evocative.
I particularly like the picture of the flax bowing in praise.

This would make a beautiful opening to a longer story.
The lovely poetry, filled with images just flows. "I love the day when God will paint me perfect." One of my favorite lines in a long time.
07/24/11
Gorgeous.

A lot of wonderful stuff in here. windows grimed by<>my story. Ain't it the truth.

That last line pulsed right through me. Perfect.
07/24/11
Lovely, a great fit with the topic.
07/27/11
Powerful imagery throughout this poetic entry. Nicely done.
As I read this beautiful description of this side of paradise, I am right there with you. And such a memorable example of the scripture verse