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07/22/11
I laughed sooooo much! This is so funny. Great story! Spontaneously I thought I'd like you in my neighbourhood. :-)I can identify with the hero of your story.
I find it amazing how offence, even unintended, can be so easily taken.
This type of person is so difficult even to deal with, much less love.
We do need every bit of God's Grace.

You make your point very effectively.
07/26/11
Funny how some people see the cloud in front of every silver lining. But sometimes it isn't funny at all. So true to life in your dialogue and sense of frustration.