The Official Writing Challenge
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07/23/11
You put a rhyme in at just the right places.

"I see the Lord at work" "I hear the Lord at work" "I see the Lord at work"

Very calming. Very lovely.

Love the title.
07/23/11
Forgive me. I knew the sequence was hear, see, hear but I typed see, hear, see. :(
Calming, inspiring, lovely poetry
07/25/11
Great imagery, scope and rhythm here, Jim. Beautiful work.
07/25/11
You have painted some beautiful word pictures in these stanzas - even this side of Paradise we find wonders to ponder, don't we!
Congratulations on recognition for your lovely poetry--fresh every week.
07/28/11
Congratulations on this wonderful poem winning the EC award. It really awoke all my senses.
07/29/11
Exquisite work, wonderful metaphors, glorious ending! Congrats, Jim!