The Official Writing Challenge
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Paragraph 3, the peach paragraph is pure genius. I agree wholeheartedly about biting into peaches. I love "unpleasant furry orb!"
Very funny! I never heard someone talk against fruit in such a humorous and thoughtful way. Great take on the subject!
HA! There were some great lines in this piece! Clever and creative take on "fruit." The only suggestion I would make is trying to come up with a more catchy title. But the entry itself was divine....kind of like blueberry pie with a heaping spoonful of whipped cream on top. :-)
Blessings, Lynda
Great last line to crown a real treat!
Oh, that wonderful last line!..funny, creative and clever, yet never loses its warmth. Such a strong 'voice'. Wonderful. God bless.
Good to the last bite! :-)
You and my husband and son should start a club. Often I doubted that the birth of Christ was first on their minds at Christmas, not when there was apple pie to be consumed! Normally I don't care for personal reflections, but this was well done, full of humor and great images.