The Official Writing Challenge
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This was a light, lively, and enjoyable read. Your characters were great and I enjoyed a chuckle or two.
07/14/11
Cute, Light-Hearted Fun read, entertaining characters, well written! Enjoyed!
07/17/11
I love this. Your characters are realistic, the title's spot on and the story flowed well to the icing sugared pockets. I think you must have been there! An original take on, 'War and Peace!
07/21/11
Great story, packed with a full blown case of humor. Loved the..."unholy ghost,"and the Ex-Lax laden cookies.
Super Congratulations on your Second Place win!!
07/21/11
Congratulations on your deserved win!
07/21/11
Congratulations Virgil. Well done!
07/21/11
I love the humour here, especially that confession-laden question in the last line. You have drawn your characters so well, and made the whole episode live. Well-deserved placing.