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07/15/11
Beautifully articulated! I was caught up in the emotion of this piece.
07/16/11
Sad truth, so often abuse begets abuse! This story provokes gut wrenching emotion as we all know too well, too many children are still abused which all too often drives their adult minds into dark places! It never ceases to amaze me how cruel mankind can be to other humans and to innocent children the worse! But I love the ending and I wept myself as I pictured this needful, injured soul kneeling and weeping and meeting the man of peace! Indeed Jesus can bring light into the darkest of places if He is but let in!!! Touching story, good job. I enjoyed the read!
07/17/11
A joy to read the ending, thank you for this beautiful peace! I love the title too, perfect!