The Official Writing Challenge
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07/20/11
Your word choices are fantastic. Love it! Flows very well. I read it twice. Very, very good.
07/20/11
Your scripture reference, especially Romans 7, represents a continous challenge that confronts every believer. Paul's struggles gives hope to us all.
In my opinion,:-)at times your rhyming seemed somewhat forced, and I was a bit confused by some lines of the poem. Ex. "But how can I(?)
Ten thousand(?) strong." Or this: "Not King, but I" - meaning unclear.

I'm also left with this question: What is the overriding message of the poem as it relates to the title?