The Official Writing Challenge
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Outstanding. This is a captivating read from beginning to end.
07/15/11
A BIG WOW...a masterpiece of imagery and imaginative detail and perspective! I was absorbed in this story, pulled right into each perfectly interwoven scene, flowed right along with every fascinating detail! Kudos on this! Loved it! Great job!
07/20/11
I'm sorely tempted to make a 'vein' attempt at humour, but I love your imagery in how you have characterised the mechanisms in our bodies that work by divine reflex rather than by any decision we might make. Truly, as the bible says, we are wonderfully made. Great work.
07/21/11
I thought that was an insightful story filled with great imagery. I enjoyed it, powerfully written. Thaks for sharing. Blessing to you and yours~