The Official Writing Challenge
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07/16/11
It certainly was not a good day to feel better! The ending took me by surprise, I'd expected it to be 'flowery.' I think this is an extremely well written piece and an original take on the topic.
07/20/11
Wow! Like Danielle, the ending took me by surprise. Very well written, such a smooth, easy read! God bless!
Wow I'm reading this in my hospital bed and relating to the MC when you hit me with the twist and took my breath away. Great ending. I never saw it coming!
07/21/11
This is a powerfully- expressive piece that gives no clue about the ending is on its way; yet it displays the awful anonymity of the random obliteration that goes hand in glove with the mania of suicide bombers and terrorism generally. Very well-written.