The Official Writing Challenge
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07/14/11
War steals our youth. Your poem clearly illustrates this with a distinctive melancholy tone. Great word pictures.
Beautiful.
07/18/11
Wow. I feel like I'm in an old cemetery that demands hushed tones. Eerie. Nice. I want to know more...
07/19/11
Great imagery and warmth, and a sense of gratitude pervades your work. Well done.
Your imagery never disappoints. I love the juxtaposition of the symbols of war and peace. Well done!
07/24/11
So moving. Melancholy, gratitude, hope all rolled into one poem that touches the soul.