The Official Writing Challenge
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07/15/11
Some very powerful truths within, some excellent food for thought... but I would suggest para-breaks to make it easier for the reader to digest.

07/16/11
Thought provoking and in line with the topic. I agree with Linda that this would benefit from space between paragraphs to break it up a bit.
07/17/11
A lot of great truth in here. Thanks for sharing!
07/20/11
Very insightful, especially about how you can pick out those with a faith in God versus those who don't in any gathering! God bless!