The Official Writing Challenge
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06/18/11
I have never read Alice In Wonderland (gasp!) but I can see this is based on that story. You had me intrigued by the knitting sheep, and the conclusion was excellent. We can't pay our debt with anyting from earth; everything is owned by God, so what could we possibly offer him that wasn't already his? How gracious he was when he sent his Son to pay the price for us. A lovely story, well done.
06/18/11
Excellent job! You captured the feel of Wonderland perfectly and your characters and dialogue were excellent. The way you ended it caught me by surprise, too. I love it when I get to say "I didn't see that coming." Thanks for sharing!
06/20/11
You've had lots of fun with a classic story. Perhaps a little bit of cruelty, to make it "Malice in Wonderland?" Good work.
06/20/11
A fun and entertaining read! LOL
I am glad your MC maintained a moral character even in Wonderland!
Congratulations on your Highly Commended award.
06/23/11
Congratulations on your HC award!
06/23/11
HC! Well done.