The Official Writing Challenge
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..'lady there's no way you can afford this'... Love this whole picture-so relateable on so many levels!
06/18/11
Love this analogy. Very nice work!
06/20/11
I like the analogy too--though at first I thought this was about shoppers cashing in on some big sale at the mall.
My first clue was the kind man who helped with the MC's heavy load. Very nicely done.
06/20/11
Great wordsmithing here with such a clear message. Well done!
06/23/11
Great metaphorical approach - but after all, what else is a metaphor?
This was a glimpse into the imagery and style of CS Lewis' "The Great Divorce."
Congratulations.