The Official Writing Challenge
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06/18/11
You've succeeded in creating this beautiful ethereal scene, a tender vision of the husband waiting and of the wife's homecalling. The words you chosen are exquisite. I love this phrase, "Calmness hangs soft like weightless gauze…" Your title is perfect, as is your message in this lovely poem.
06/19/11
Wow! :)