The Official Writing Challenge
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Good story; it made me think. An interesting presentation of a moral dilemma, although a little abstract.
Great story with many applications to modern science and to all behavioral decisions. I was glued from beginning to end!
This reminds me very much of 'Quatermass,' in the way that it explores the morality and ethics of where the line of scientific experiment should be drawn. Very interesting indeed. God bless.
This was very well written, clear, yet leaving the reader wanting more. Great ending!

Ooh ... that last line sent shivers up my spine! I enjoyed this piece. It was thought-provoking, and the characters came to life. Well done.
What a unique story. I ejoyed it! Great job!
I felt like I was watching a movie! Good delivery..I enjoyed it very much!
Lisa, congratulations on your 8th place in the Editors' Choice. Well done! Another very clever entry. With love, Deb (Challenge Coordinator)
This is very creative and insightful, Lisa. I love the sci-fi feeling and the "hiss" was brilliant! Good job and well deserving of recognition. A blessing to read.