The Official Writing Challenge
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Well, should I point out the obvious that you are smacking your head over? The drama was in aisles seven. Oboy. No big deal so leave your poor head alone, okay? :)

Now that is out of the way, I like how the checkout girl handled the situation and I LOVE how you described the man even though it was pretty gross and I'm glad I wasn't eating anything at the time. I do have to wonder what was wrong with him, though. And Cruella's kids were just brats - like mother like kids, I'd say!

Nice job:)
VERY nicely done - great descriptions!
Wow! Now the Weekly Challenge now moves into 3D! Congratulations! This is a truly tactile experience for its descriptions and for its sense of feeling. Great stuff!