The Official Writing Challenge
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06/17/11
I would suggest you consider separating this into paragraphs, to make it easier to read.

But very good message here and I love the example of the mule focusing on too many things that distracted him from the job at hand! Yes, spiritual blinders as part of our armor would be great, blinders of righteousness and Godly wisdom to shield our eyes from worldly distractions!!

Wonderful and wise thought provoking sermonette here, enjoyed!!


Good point! Far too many distractions in this world, and it's good to be reminded of where our focus should be. Thanks.
06/19/11
Good thoughts, but para breaks will help your readers to build up with you towards your conclusion.