The Official Writing Challenge
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This is a wonderfully empathic story; very engaging and well written.
06/16/11
I love how this shows the value of good friendships. God bless!
06/17/11
I enjoyed your exposure of spiritualised denial of inconsistencies that scream out to those who aren't part of the inner sanctum. Good to see two friends sticking to each other....
06/17/11
Very wise and discerning young man Brett… and so glad his friend Jack left with him! When we see “fruits” so evidently contrary to what God’s word shows us should be coming forth, and yet the people deny it, it is wise to walk away from it! Great story of wisdom and friendship!
Good dialogue! I liked the way the story unfolded.
06/21/11
I really like this story. It's honest and real, and I applaud the two guys for leaving! Well done.
Congratulations on your Highly Commended award.
06/23/11
Congratulations on your HC award!
06/23/11
Congratulations on being highly commended.