The Official Writing Challenge
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06/12/11
Beautiful.

I'm not very familiar with poetry rules and such, but for me this had an--oh, what would you say? An old fashion flare. I really enjoyed the cadence. Loved taking this journey with you!
06/12/11
Lovely word choices to complement an excellent message. Great work!
06/13/11
This message, in verse, reminds us of how thankful we should be that God keeps us from shipwrecking our lives. Thanks!
06/13/11
I like this poem of faith and trust. A message to recall when fear takes hold.
You did an excellent job with this poem--for word choices, as well as message.
This is a beautiful reminder that I often need.

Congratulations for placing 14th in Masters and15th overall!
Sorry 17 th overall but still a great job!